nippon sequence 
  ja
bar he scratches out japan writes nippon 
  
  are women in america beaten she asks 
  the geisha does what she's not supposed to do 
  we don't write winter haiku in summer 
  our talk his wife and daughter behind curtains 
  rinds bob at the shoreline
 lot of luggage through hiroshima laughing *
  woman at home who is she 
Frogpond 9:3 1986
note
  line change August 1989 
  * lot of luggage through hiroshima as if forever