hope you don't mind that i tampered again w/your 3-line. i just can't understand until i see one stretched out. after 20 years of only 1-line other kinds seem like a chopped snake. i guess i'm a bit odd. truly don't mean to offend. i like what you've suggested/begun.
like very much your 'chopped-up snake' cow haiku and others you've sent recently. in the whirlwind didn't get a chance to respond. who calls you a newbie besides yourself? i doesn't. unless we are lucky to see things anew.
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